i like it, but i wonder if there is not another way to do this. do you have some kind of badge or something that is sewn onto clothing. you could have a soldier looking to the left like he is talking to someone, with his gun up rested against his shoulder. all of the background and the soldier himself is in black and white except for his badge. keep the text exactly where it is, except for make the nco vision part in a larger font, by larger i mean that it spreads wider horizontally across the top of the poster. try that out if you feel like it.